Sunday, July 19, 2009

Survivor-the fittest

It was a slow rise of dawn, the dark of night sky was fading into the gradual invasion of morning glow. Apart from the herd, she was here, in solitude bidding goodbye to the florescence of moon. Soon a shadow came over; it was huge covering the vastness of her sky.


He stood tall, a golden brown giant with fiery eyes. On the spur of the moment the world turned upside down for her. They had an eye lock, where the electromagnetic beam of his line of sight was burning her eyes in fear. The axons didn’t respond! Or better say, a brown black female impala with an average built had lost her senses when a South African lion mirrored her.


He took a silent, imposing step ahead. She went numb, frozen, cursing her existence to bear the agony of its monstrous end. Before she would step into the state of mental trauma, his ear piercing roar hit her senses as if iron was being beaten on a giant anvil.


The hit was hard. It stirred her soul to the core. The sudden impact worked as a wake up call. She was no more of a forlorn. Her eyelid raised, and the dark iris penetrated the sight of the beast of prey.
Before he could understand her fortitude, she responded. ……..
With a step to her left and he followed her to his left. The sequence continued and soon both had a 180 degree flip. And it was true in all respects. The exchange was not only in position but also that of psychic hold.
He found the instant valor of the timid creature as something hard to digest. But the mind games still were on…….

A step straight right, he aped him in wrath. Then one straight back, he again followed .now one somewhat tilted to right. He again…………….and …….”aaahhhhh”.
A sharp spine hanging from the wild bush pierced his eye membrane and his built dismantled on the ground in pain.
“Yeah” was the subconscious reaction for her! The instant plan went like clockwork for her. Without wasting a single moment she ran rock hard for her survival.
Within a few minutes, she had left the frightening beast miles back. Her stride was cheerful, and soul thanking the supreme power for all that happened. It happened for good, something that was to be written in the impalian history with the letters of gold.


She stood erect and her head bowed for the almighty” the win is of your existence, for making my morale stand high, for respecting the importance of my being in this world of yours” she thanked.
But Mother Nature has different rules………
A sudden grab form her back clutched her tight. Before she could come to a conclusion. He batted her hard with his front paws, and she hit hard on ground. A blast of sand dimmed her vision. Soon, the mist cleared. It was surely not the same giant. After all, there is no dearth of predators. The dawn was finally overtaken by the first drop of sun.

A massive, fatal dig of his claw and left her at her last gasp.
Was that survival of the fittest?...might be!
Or better say survivor is the fittest. And rest all history..
Nature has firm rules, mind rules over matter, but still matter matters the most. A good omen is not always followed by knock of good time. A moment is momentry whether a win or a loss happiness or sorrow . the continuity of time is discrete and no single fraction of second has impact or relation with other. And why not? After all, It is the uncertainty of life which makes it beautiful, and each moment precious as gold.

PS: the use of he, she and other expressions is just to make the composition humanoid

10 Comments:

Unknown said...

There is only one thing that's certain for sure, and that's uncertainty. So the only security is to live with insecurity.

Great writing girl, keep it going!

The Aspirant said...

hmmm
a very deep thinking this time....
really awesome post..

Rahil said...

hey, visiting ur blog for the 1st time...quite simple and beautiful !!

And about the post very well written, and definately its the survival of the fittest..

Alishah said...

sorry i take my words back

anyways you were talking about a book how cars work well it is not avail for free

Anoop said...

good... :)

agent X said...

nice blog bt plz change either the font colour of page back ground... its causing a lil mixup n confusion

Abhijit Bhattacharyya said...

good blog writing........

but what i v always felt that survival of the fittest should not apply to a perfect society....a society where every body has the right to live...and live.....but dreams of a perfect society are utopian and probably..a bit unrealistic......so darwin triumphs.....

Anumeha said...

thanx all...
@agent x..
done!
@insanevisitations...
i meant its not datfittest will survive all d tyms....in fact its vice versa.....whoever is d survivor, is fittest....thejourney matters to a person but not to d society we live in...in a nut shell....only result count....

Anand said...

You write really well. There has been a few changes from the last time I came here.

I don't know what made you come up with such a piece of work(post). But it surely has the touch of a script writer. ;-)

Trivia:

I wouldn't call it a Midas touch, for I preserve it for the guy who commented after the above person. Just joking (Though I am serious at it)

angel from heaven said...

A very descriptive piece of writing very imaginary.